Carpe Fulgur On Localizing Recettear

By Melinda . September 2, 2010 . 12:25pm

 

Starting with this post, as part of our ongoing interview with Carpe Fulgur, the localization team behind doujin title Recettear, we’re going to be dealing with questions regarding the game’s localization, and putting the process under a microscope to see just how the English version was approached.

 

Concerning the localization process, what do you see as the focus of your efforts, your rationale or motto when it comes to changing the raw text? What lines do you draw when making the decisions on providing focuses like accents, catch phrases and the like?

 

Carpe Fulgur co-founder, Andrew Dice: Interesting you should ask this. The primary mantra when editing the text is: “Keep it true to the work itself”. That is, whatever the text ends up reading like, make sure it makes sense in the context of the world provided in the story and that characters and plot elements are consistent throughout. A good example is Tear saying “Merde” at times; we learned from EGS that the setting of Recettear is essentially Fantasy Not-France, so several characters break the “translation barrier” as it were and drop a few recognizable idioms in French (Tear’s in particular to replace a similar “good grief” catchphrase she had in Japanese).

 

It added a little extra flavor to the text, and it’s true to the world Recettear provides and makes it seem a little more “real” to the player. I also work to make sure that all of the characters maintain a roughly consistent voice throughout – Tear’s very formal language which practically lacks any contractions at all, Recette’s oddball phraseology, Caillou’s occasional linguistic slip-up wherein he speaks more like someone his age “should” speak, you have to make sure all of this is consistent or the characters come across as flat.

 

Another example of “being true to the work” might lie in how I’d approach something like Muramasa. A lot of people (rightly) harped on the cuts made to the game’s dialogue (cuts mostly brought about by hideously inept translation), but I know some people complained that Japanese was the only vocal option in that game. To be honest, had I been in charge of the project, I’d have also left Japanese as the only vocal option even if the budget for an English cast was available.

 

Muramasa is already so incredibly drenched in classic Japanese culture, that it would actually feel right, I think, for the voicework to remain Japanese, almost like watching a subtitled Kurosawa film or somesuch. Many people interested in Muramasa would already be looking for that very Japanese cultural experience, so it’d be worth it to remain as true to the spirit of the work as possible.

 

Occasionally this requires a bit of creative editing as well — a lot of Recette’s sayings like “Capitalism, ho” or “Yayifications” are, technically, inventions of the localization, but they were done in order to get Recette’s boundless enthusiasm for her job across the language barrier. She absolutely loves what she does, and she drops sayings like “Yatta!” constantly, but just translating it “straight” doesn’t really get her voice across properly. She pretty much needs the “quirkiness” to get her character across in English; without it, she doesn’t come across correctly and reads far too flatly (and yes, we tried it).

 

Now, obviously you need to apply some logic to all this; we don’t want everyone to have OUTRRRRRAGEOUS French accents, for example, as the text actually needs to be legible. And naturally you have to be real careful to not change any plot elements — you’re bringing the game over in part because you like the plot in the first place (or we hope, at least), so as editor you need to strike a delicate balance of making sure the script is engaging in English without actually mangling anything.

 

Above all, though, it needs to be true to the spirit of what you are working on — it needs to make sense internally to the person experiencing it, it needs to sound consistent, and it needs to sound authentic.

 

How much research did you have to put in to try and cast the characters correctly for the localization process? Can you touch upon what the localization process is like for a text-heavy game like Recettear?

 

There was quite a bit of back-and-forth with EGS about various characters. Recettear’s setting (which is shared with Chantelise and the upcoming Territoire) has quite a bit of backstory to it, and we wanted to make sure we understood the character histories and the like as we went ahead and crafted what each character sounded like in English. There wasn’t a lot of external research — EGS ultimately defined the characters, after all — but we did talk over a lot of things with EGS to ensure we understood the characters and their world as best we could.

 

The way we approached Recettear was to break the game into chunks for raw: do one block of related text, then the next, then perhaps the item list, then the next event block, etc., then do a rough draft of the localized script for each, and once the whole was complete we’d go back and look over the script again, and see if any changes needed to be made to help the various parts flow together or connect better. It helped that the Recettear text is organized into major events and arcs internally, so we were able to organize things internally fairly quickly.

 

Beyond that, you simply take it one step at a time — work on the script, play it through, read it, keep the rest of the script in mind and what this scene or that item needs to do in the wider picture. EGS was hugely helpful in that they provided us with several of their dev tools that allowed us to edit individual scenes and then immediately reload that scene to view the changes (and do similarly for Recettear’s massive item list) — I can’t imagine trying to do this project without it.

 

Stay tuned for more talk of Recettear’s localization over the next few days. Next time, we’ll discuss translating humour and Carpe Fulgur’s future plans.



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  • http://thrust-the-sky.deviantart.com/ WildArms

    im gonna make my first steam account for this :D, i’m really happy to see a company interested in these kind of games, ill be looking forward to the “Carpe Fulgur’s future plans” >8D

  • http://www.facebook.com/AllenSmithee Samuel Smithee Bateman

    All I’m worried about is if the game has glitches or bugs or something, added in the translation. But, I’m remaining hopeful, and with any luck I’ll have my own computer to use my Steam account on and I’ll be able to snatch this game up and finally be able to play ANY of the games I own on there, but can’t play because I have no computer to do so!

    Whew, that’s a mouthful!

  • http://twitter.com/charliesabers Carlos Escalante

    I can’t help but cheer for you guys. There’s nothing better than doing what you love, and you obviously love it…and are good at it!

    Hope you can port it to Mac or something, if not I shall have to install Windows on my MB!

  • Guest

    So I played the demo… and I loved it. Great localization, much better than a lot of other big-name releases. Well, “big-name” compared to Recettear.

    *cough*NISandIgnition*cough

    Sorry, bad cough… Dunno how I got it. Anyway, it’s brilliant. …At least I think so.

  • TyeTheCzar

    If Carpe Fulgur is really as good as the likes of Atlus or Nintendo, then I bet they could be trusted with localizing Touhou games… that is, if they can understand what the characters are saying at all.

    • http://denpanosekai.blogspot.com denpanosekai

      There are some English Touhou patches and they’re fine. What are you insinuating here? That Recettear run their spreadsheets through Google Translate or that Touhou scripts are too batshit insane for a proper translation?

    • http://honorless.net honorless

      You are aware that ZUN has been approached by multiple localizers (and not just English ones) but has turned them all down since he’s happy with the Japanese market, right?
      http://novelnews.net/2009/07/10/interview-with-rockin-android/
      It’s not a matter of trustworthiness, it’s a matter of ZUN not wanting/needing to expand his audience overseas with official releases.

      …IMO, it’d be better for CF and other localizers to concentrate on doujin games that are more difficult to obtain and/or present a significant language barrier to non-Japanese speakers. Don’t you think?

      • cj_iwakura

        ZUN’s deluding himself, then. Touhou already has a devout worldwide following. The question is whether or not he wants to start profiting from it, or stay content with people downloading his games for free.

        • http://honorless.net honorless

          …Did you…understand my comment, or that article? No offense meant.

          Nowhere is it said that ZUN is unaware of Touhou’s overseas fanbase. Dude works (worked?) for Taito, IIRC—he probably realizes all those localizers aren’t getting in touch with him just to chat or go out for drinks. ;)

          The exact point being made is in your last sentence. At least for now, he’s content with NOT profiting from an overseas licensing deal. Dude is either unaware of the piracy going on, or (much more likely IMO) apathetic to it.

  • http://twitter.com/Fiohnel Raide
  • epiphaniesarefun

    I’m fully behind this :) Hell, I’ll buy it twice to support Carpe Fulgur :P

  • http://denpanosekai.blogspot.com denpanosekai

    Attention Andrew Dice:

    You are an awesome dude with a great understanding of what localization should be all about. Please switch to consoles when you’re done with doujin.

    End of transmission.

    • http://www.carpefulgur.com SpaceDrake

      Easier said than done, I’m afraid, but we’ll see what the future holds!

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_6T2SUPFIAJ6SQDJKKG4C5SJNYE D

    I salute Carpe Fulgur, and their efforts for a quality localization of this game. I have yet to see other game companies do what you are doing now. you have my support come September 10.

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_6T2SUPFIAJ6SQDJKKG4C5SJNYE D

    I salute Carpe Fulgur, and their efforts on making a quality localization of this game. I have yet to see other game companies follow your footsteps, considering that they, no doubt, have more funds to make better localizations than what they usually give their audience.You have my support come September 10.

    Note: sorry for the double post ;P

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